Monday, September 22, 2014

#75

The First love

Lights dim.
Silence screaming in the night.
Curtains dancing back and forth.
He caught her
Felt her.
The smell.
It was just him and her.
She slipped.
He held her.
"Finally!" He said.

As he flipped the book open.
He smiled seeing his first love.


8 comments:

Mr.Miglani said...

Nice Ones.I like the ones with twists and sting !

Ravish Mani said...

Good teaser...

Unknown said...

Good one...unpredictable :)

Anonymous said...

All smiles so thank you. Brilliant and Bravo. The first innocent love indeed :) Good one Divsi!

M S Mahawar said...

Very nice..Romantic scene!

divsi said...

thanks :D

divsi said...

Thanks:)

divsi said...

Thanks a lot Shanx:)