A mischievous glance,
A victory dance,
An impish grin,
Tantrums n din!
A childish stare,
A devilish dare,
A carefree laugh,
The know-it-all scoff!
An occasional wink;)
The fluttery blink blink..
The fatal threats,
The lame bets,
The impatient "sighs"
The dramatic "oh mys!"
The pensive gaze,
The silent phase,
Pandemonium inside,
Eyes as if just cried,
Yet a smile..simple &stout,
Defying doubts!
Fragile is what you see..
Robust she is mentally!
Crazy yet painfully sane.
Can innocently feign...
I bet you just can't RATIONALLY think..
When you fall for a girl's "blink blink":)
26 comments:
the color pink :P :P
well well well
how true can these words be :)
brilliant
Chic facts with the best poetic flow ;) ;) !!
silent phase? sachi? :p
awesome work:)
@ mg:
hahah..yea yea..onli we can go PINK widout havin eyebrows raised
@ karthik: thanks so much!
@ zubin: hehe:))thankoo!
@pri : thnks<3<3
@ prince: yaa silent phase too:P:P:P thnks buddy!
Cats and women......just the same.
hey nice one.. blink blink... :D
Great one again!!!!
:) :)
Blink ;)Girls rock.. n this is again a masterpiece by you my gf :)
LOL, so much depth in a little gesture of wink wink... my my!!
:)...true!!
Good flow dear..:) way to go...
awwwieeeeee!!!!! sho cute!!!!!!
I like being a girl :) :)
Very nice divi:)))
Ah, the fluttering lashes of a girl...cannot help but fall prey to those pretty butterflies ;)
hey amazing :D ... i just loved it .. can't explain wat exactly i'm feeling but .. wow.. its just soo truee !
"I bet you just can't RATIONALLY think..
When you fall for a girl's "blink blink":)"
these are the best lines !!
@ sapna: lolzzz
@ gary: thanks ;);)
@ shalu: thankoo sweetie!
@ grishie: yeaaa we do:) *hugs*
@ pramoda: thankew:)
@ andy: thanks bro:)
@ shaun: now thats one honest guy! proud of u buddy:):)
p.s: its "humanly" impossible not to fall prey..lol
@ B.A:
oh my:p it wasnt jus one gesture...read again..n theres a difference btwn blink n wink:p see thats y the DEEP poem:D
@ prashant: thanks so much!! glad u liked it:))
hope ure doin gud! loong tym!:)
lol.
loved the end and the flow.
Made me happy! :-) The flow was good. The grace is profound. The conclusion is astoundingly bare and shamelessly bold. ;-) Can tell beyond the shadow of a doubt that this came for a fun-loving, carefree and jolly girl. :-D
Now, what about the boys?!
@divsi .. yea somehow was not writing anything for a looong tym.. recently posted a short poem..
described a girl beautifully in words...........
awesome..!! :)
Thanks so much Sumit!
Thankyou Singh Saab :)
Thanks a lot Vikas.. Sorry for the late reply. Been away for a long time. Hope you are doing good.
Thankyou Vittal :) hehe feels so good reading your comments always!:)
hmmm about the boys will do a write up soon :p
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