Dont leave me stranded...in this strange world with weird ways..
hold me close..tightly in your arms..
oblivious to what happens outside...
safe and secure...
in our 'own' little world...
dont let me go...
I am bound to be lost...
the only place i am safe...
is in your arms...!
picture location: vrindavan, U.P
18 comments:
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Nicely composed.
wowwwwwwwww :):)..superb :):) loved it soooooooooooo much :):) picture and the writing is sooooo much in sync :):)As usual, keep up your great work so we all can read great things :):)
short and sweet...awesome!...nice click :)
its a bliss being small..you'd know better what i am saying :):)
nice pic buds :))
back with a bang ehh??? when did you start taking photos tooo????????? Superb capture this one and the others too!!
Where were you so long? tell us something ?
This one is nice very beautifully composed !!Great Work and welcome back to Blogging world again !:)
grt..Divsi..i didnt know you are such a good writer..good pictures as well..Nice!!!!
Hi Divyakshi,
Exactly when was it I last wrote a comment, I don't remember, but thanks to your link in FB I landed here to read this piece.
The piece has very strong emotion hidden amongst the modestly worded verses. Comes to prove a point that "proving a point" doesn't have to be in forceful wordings. I don't think the essence of the poem has to be explicitly mentioned in my comments as it is plainly visible. A really "touching" piece for lack of a better word.
Warm regards,
Vittal
P.S.: Titely? ;-)
Also I forgot to mention in my earlier comment that inspiration can come with the things we tend to ignore as ordinary. I like the inspiration behind the words too.
it really gos so well with the picture.. it is almost as if the picture is speaking!!
Fantastic picture.
My eyes got glued to it.
@ braj: thanks!!!
@ zz: thankoooo!:))))m sooo happie u loved it!!
will keep posting regularly..*blink blink*
@ umesh: thnx buddy!:)
@ sush:hehe yes yes n its a bliss bein pampered:))))
*gives a know-it-all look":p
@ ruch: thanx dearie:)))
@ shantanu: hieee welcome!!!! glad to have you back here! i have been clickin since long!!
u dint notice:(:(:( hehe
was away courtesy admissions n studies but now things back on track:D
@ nisha: thanx dear! :) :) welcome to my blog!!! its a pleasure having u here!
@bharat: thankyou!!!!!its been motivation from all u guys to push me to make a comeback after a looong hibernation:p
@vittal:
cant tell you how happy i am when i get your comment{ my blog mentor u are and u shall remain:D]
hehe! that P.S was imperative enough that i immediately edit that:D lol
you understood so perfectly that the most profound emotions can be expressed simply ..ordinary things that get faded with complexities:) thanks so much!!:)
wow picture :D :D
@indrani: thankyou!!!!!
@ viraj: thnx buddy:D
:-) great work, divyakshi....also the pic is nice.
So so cute and lovely shot
and I love your words !!!!
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