the soft..the tiny...the supple..innocent hands..
growing into the "coarse", the robust, responsible ones...
the once sturdy,independent ,riteous shoulder,
turning into a helpless,wobbly,brittle one,ready to surrender...
inevitable is the advent of dependence..
inevitable is the fading of innocence..
the changing of seasons..fall, rain,sun and snow..
the lush green leaves drying to a pale yellow..
the torrents of raindrops when the sun's gone..
the snow cover vanishes when spring's reborn...
inevitable is the burning summer heat...
inevitable is the falling of leaves...
slowly gradually someone walks in your life..
holding your hand n leadin you starry-eyed..
understnding your unspoken words..reading your mind..
from a friend to someone special...a caring bond that binds..
inevitable is the fluttering of heart..
inevitable is the fear of it ending after its starts..
the resounding laughter of the angel of the house..
the tantrum thrower is off with her spouse..
the chilling silence when she's not around...
what echoes in your mind- her voices ..her sounds...
inevitable is the going of your princess..
inevitable is the flow of tears ,you suppress..
without a change in its course even water becomes stagnant..
however it may be..its just "change" that is constant...
the thing that keeps us going- what after the intermission?
imagine what life would be without "timely transition"???
26 comments:
awesome x))
So, finally u wrote sumthin about the ineviatble change. rightly said. life will be real boring without these transitions. they are good if we enjoy the entire process.
Excellent Master Piece buddy!!!!:)
Speechless !!!
Truly Beautiful..!!:)
it's really very nice!!!!
Nice Nice.. :D
You've taken all the different incidents... and roped it together beautifully... True, what would life be if it were to become all static... :-s
I loves... :)
Am doing good... :D :D Have holidays, trying to study for CAT :-s wassup with you babe? :-w
very very nice n touching..
i especially liked -
"the changing of seasons..fall, rain,sun and snow..
the lush green leaves drying to a pale yellow..
the torrents of raindrops when the sun's gone..
the snow cover vanishes when spring's reborn..."
u hav, in these lines very interestingly written abt the negetive changes first n den just at the end of para u induced hope (the snow cover vanishes when spring's reborn...).. n the effect is rejuvanating !
gr8 job!
n i liked the picture in the post too.. u urself click all the pics?
Great feelings, loved reading the phases of transition.
Dear me! I am speechless! It is absolutely B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. Sorry, I cannot write more. I am so overwhelmed with awe. Well done, dear! :-)
Haaye!!!! Tu tto maar hi daalti hai!!!!
KILLER skills you have got girl!!!!
I just LOVE the way your words flow...so effortlessly and so seamlessly....
Love :)
how wonderfully you captured the transition of events occurring right from mother nature to person's (child's) life...perfect and universal conclusion that there is no progress w/o transition...but dont you think things change for only good and also its not necessary for all inevitable's to always come true??
kip such things flowing divsi...amazing piece of art as usual...:):):)
Beautiful piece of writing and very well framed words !!A great post with great feelings !!
Awww..Divsi!!
Love <3!!!
Only you can write words with that flow....I'm awestruck!!
Jai ho..Divsi...!!!
Divsi ki Jai!!
(Dun mind...protesting a lot in coll these days...toh effect yahan bhi aa gaya)
Anyway...lovely writeup!!!
This is BEAUTIFUL dear.
like a breath of fresh air.
Totally loved... all of it. :D
I want more n more like this post.
take care n hugs
i was lost in the flow of the poem. it spoke to me... and i could hear the undercurrents..
beautifully done....
@ choc lover:
hey gurl! welcome back! long time:)
thnx a tonner:)
@ anant:
hehe:) yes buddy! finally sumthin on change:)
exactly life wud indeed be so tasteless widout these "inevitables":)
@ sush:
thankooo buddy!!:))frm the bottom of the heart:)
god bless!
@ sumit:
heya welcome to my blog:)thnx a ton! n yea do keep vistin!:)
@ akansha:
thnxie gurl!!:))
all d bestie for the prep!!!:) hope u bell it well:D:D
m doin gud too:)
tc hugs!
@ prashant:
thankyou so much!
glad u liked it n superbly interpreted:)
n yes this pic is clicked by me..thnx! mostly pictures here are my shots:):)
kip visitin!:)
this is something i have no words for.i m still in a mesmerised state of mind.love.
@ indrani:
thankyou so much!:)
nice to cya here after long..
hope u re doin gud:)
@ vittal:
and i m speechless after your comment!
u kno how much it means to me???:)
thanking you frm the bottom of my heart!:))
tc
@ ish:
hehe:) thnkie thankie kudiye:)
*take a hug*
so glad u liked it!:)
lotsa love sweetie:)
@ zuboid:
:):):):)agreed its not necessary for all inevitables to come true..but yes CHANGE is definitely inevitable...
bound to happen in due course of tume..no person..no time..no state of mind is permanent:)
this si the unwritten rule of life...
*sigh*
:D
@ bharat:
thankz a zillion buddy:)
so glad u liked it:):)
@ rhythm:
lol lol lol :D:D:D
that was sucha sweet comment my darlin!:)
*flashes her 1000 watt smile:p*
love u loads<3<3
@ vicky:
thnkewww buddy! glad u liked it:)
there will be more of it...i promise:)
kip visitin!
tc:)
@ chhaya:
thnks a tonner:]]
it makes u beam wen sumone says the poem spoke to them..
thnx!:)
@ mishree:
thnx so much dear!:)
i read yr latest post...cudnt leave behind a comment..u have changed yr comment settings??
lemme kno!
tc:)
Dearest Divsi,
You have a talent for saying things so beautifully.I am really awed by the following lines - "
without a change in its course even water becomes stagnant..
however it may be..its just "change" that is constant...
the thing that keeps us going- what after the intermission?
imagine what life would be without "timely transition"???"
Your flawless choice of picture and perfect rhyme deserves many many applauds!!!
~ The Latecomer
the tragedy of time is it never stops.
lovely poem!
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