a poem dedicated to all those who have left an imprint in my life:)
a poem for those who ve taught me lessons- either with their love or even by their deceit..
Today I sat lost in thoughts on the shore,
watching the world in copious scores..
A wave appeared then another ..all in a line,
an unending phenomena occuring all the time!
receding softly when the tides low and gushing forward during high tides,
waves dancing to and fro, just like the people in our lives!
some who rush out as quickly as they rushed in,
some who stood through thick and thin..
some who failed to leave behind a mark..
some whose shadows you can feel even in the dark..
some who changed you while you stood unaware..
some you thought were genuine while they were busy feigning care..
some loved you but never expressed..
some you loved but never confessed..
some whose deceit made your blood boil..
some whom you hurt unknowingly ..in sleepless nights you coil..
some whose honey dipped tongues hid their coal-burnt insides..
some whose blunt yet truthful tones unveiled "your other side"..
some for whom you'll always BE A REASON TO LIVE..
some who just dont know whats receiving..coz they ve only LEARNT to GIVE...
some whose value you may never ever realise..
some who'll leave you stranded,without notice,without goodbyes..
waves will come and waves will go..
surging surging high tides, receding when low..
some may engulf you,
some may lead you safely to the shore..
some may calm your senses..
some may topple boats:)
an incessant phenomena occuring all the time...
waves dancing to n fro.. just like the people in our lives....
-october 2009
43 comments:
After reading this post i certainly felt that what i wrote is nothing in front of this one..This is so related to my life too...I Loved the way your expressed the whole life feelings in few lines..This is something that will touch every one's heart now or later..Great post...You are a Super Writer of course a Great photographer too...Great work and Great words...
And Yes Blog Start Up Music is awesome !! My Favorite Movie "GURU"...My motivation level is going high ...Thanks to u..:)
And for This "Rajasthan Rajputana Rifles" Salute you !!
beauty!!!!!!!!:)
A brilliant piece of poetry...there are pieces which are actually beautiful but this one is fabtabulous yaar...I could so connect to it...n that's special about ur writing..u always coneect to it...atleast i always do!!
Keep up d gr8 work Divsi!!:)
Really a gorgeous representation with words. I love it!
And oh yes, you can write a poetry on the bench you've commented on :) I'll be very happy to read it.
OMG... I was like associating people with every line out there... this is soo soo true, it's actually the way I would've belted out... love it Divsi... :)
@ bharat:
thnx for always makin my day wid yr awesum comments buddy:)
they always make me :))
n the rajputana salute!
oh my i m so honoured:)thnkeww:)
your post is unique in its own way bharat..
and as blogger buddy UNWRITTEN RULE GOES we shall never ever compare:)
i love the guru song too..brilliantly sung..*high 5 for dat*
:)
That was an awesome post I've ever read! :) Not saying it for the sake of saying trust me... It was BEAUTIFUL =)
Keep writing! :)
Hey just drop by your blog.. Must say its a gr8 piece of art..Poem must say its awesome..the way it has portrayed the feelings of the person...exceptionally well..Keep going..
Regards
Niraj
masallalemonade.blogspot.com
You can write so WONDERFUL :-)
Very creative ....
Great post !!
Have a nice weekend :-)
awesuummmm!!!!! :)) I wonder y it took 6 months for you to publish this wonderful piece of art!! But keep up the awesuuummm work :):)
beautiful as always :)...must say there are too many someones in your life :p
Wonderful..
this is fantastic..:)
Teri poetry ka hoestly jawab nai hai!!!!
This was so friggin good ya!!!!
And so very true!!!
Loved it!!
Cheers
A beautiful poem. The use of the phenomenon of waves to explain the inflow/outflow of people in our lives is an ingenious idea. Also ingenious is the way you have worded it. I loved each and every bit of it.
P.S.: By the way, you missed two or three posts at my blog. I hope I am not boring you with what I write! ;-)
A gud piece of scribling!!!! :)
Some people stay and some just go...
Came here for a new post!
@ sush: thanku thanku:)
@ rhythm: i love it wen ppl can connect..funny na...how evryones lives are connected in a similar way at sum or the other point in our lives...:)
thnxxx for the appreciation kudiye:):)
tc hugs!!
@ bhavesh:
thankewwww!!!
n yes i ll make one poem veryyy soon:) n link yr photo as well:))
tc!
@ akansha:
thnkoo:) wen i drafted it i associated one line wid one person too:p:p hehe
@ esther:
hey welcome to my blog!!!:)
thnx for visitin n glad u liked the post!
@ niraj:
welcome to my blog:)) thnx so much for yr appreciation:))
kip visitin!!
tc
:)
@ anya:
thankyouuuuuu ma'am!!! :)) m so happy u like it!:)
have a lovely weekend!!:)
@ zuboid:
thankoo thankoo thankoo:))for 6 months it was lying on the last page of my book:):) found it n then put it up!!:) hehe
@ prince: thankew buddy:) yesh too many sumones:|:|:| hehe[ lesser than yours;)] lol
@ sorcerer: thankyou so much!:)
@ ish:
awww!! dhanku dhanku!!:) hehe
*grinnin ear to ear*:)
cheers:))
@ vittal:
thanx a tonner!i always look fwd to ya comment n yr feedback:)
m so glad u like this one!!
n a trillion apologiessss!!:((
u think i ll ever be bored by yr writings????:O:O:O dont embarass me!!:(
been tied up wid sumthin..not bein able to read n comment on blogs..will do it asap!!!
tc:)
@ dudo:
thankyou:))
@ rajat:
:) thats the unwritten rule of L.I.F.E:)
Dear Divsi,
The first thing which touches me when I read your posts, and specially this one, is your honesty. Perhaps that is why as I read each line of your poem it naturally became a part of that open space of realization and cognizance.
Thank you for making every visit to your blog a beautiful experience. God bless you girl!
Between, sorry for dropping in late for this one. You see, I was busy studying (if only you believe that):P.
some whose honey dipped tongues hid their coal-burnt insides.
some for whom you'll always BE A REASON TO LIVE..
some who just dont know whats receiving..coz they ve only LEARNT to GIVE...
the three respected beings!
Loved it!!! Real beauty!!!!!
I saw your kind comment on my blog. The post- Her pink patiyala.
Thank you so much :)
Hope we keep in touch!
Well... feeling like someone has put my life in words... beautiful... my favs are
"some who changed you while you stood unaware..
some you thought were genuine while they were busy feigning care..
some loved you but never expressed..
some you loved but never confessed.."
Very beautifully expressed emotions...
Wow!
a whole palette of rushing emotions and introspections. an awesome piece of writing.
waves dancing to and fro, just like the people in our lives!
This is the most beautiful line in the poem. :)
hey it was great..!
really awesome..!
one of the best i have ever read
@ pallavi:
thankyou so much dear!!
i feel like readin ya comment again n again:D
m glad u appreciate posts,relate to them n feel good [m so so glad!!]:)
its a pleasure having you around with comments n soulful feedback:)
god bless u too gal!!:)
p.s: i kno i kno u wer studyin:p hehe
love,
divsi
@ ajay:
long tym!!
thanx for droppin in!:)
hope evrythins good at yr end:)
@ nil:
thankyou:)))hope to cya again!!
p.s: the pink patiyala post was awesome!:D
The feeling is quite mutual dear.
Love
@ navi : welcome to my space:)
thnx for vistin!!:)
@ chaya: thankyou:):):)
@ chandrika: thanks ma'am!:) welcum to my blog:))
hope to cya again!:)
@ sepo:
welcum to my blog:))
thnx for droppin in!!
n thats a huge compliment!:))
thankyouuuu!!
some whose shadows you can feel even in the dark..
some loved you but never expressed..
some whose blunt yet truthful tones unveiled "your other side".
some for whom you'll always BE A REASON TO LIVE..
some whose value you may never ever realize..
some who'll leave you stranded,without notice,without goodbyes..
Loved it!
Lovely! I'm touched.... People are amazing aren't they?? :)
Beautiful is the word.. seriously..!!
i've never read a poem this simple and sweet.. i was just wishing it dint end..
the best line.. being dis..
"some for whom you'll always BE A REASON TO LIVE..
some who just dont know whats receiving..coz they ve only LEARNT to GIVE..."
awesome stuff.. yaa..
and btw thanks for commenting..
you got urself a 100th devoted follower.. i'll keep coming in.. take care.. :)
@ sophie:
thankyou:):):)
@ warmsunshine:
welcome to my blog:)
thnx for commentin!!:)
yes people are indeed amazin!!
@ prateek:
oh my!!!
u dont kno the happiness u ve given me:):)
*flashes a 1000 watt grin*
thankyou for makin my day by turnin the count to 100:D:D
[trust me u ll be a very memorable reader;) hehe]
cheers! tc:)
superb!every statement is so true.as the sayin goes"people cum,ppl go.life goes on.they leave memories whch are meant to be cherished and treasured forever.
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