its a decade since she left them..
teary eyed they sit back and recollect..
"a helpful friend of a precious kind, a rare gem..
gratifying whoever she met!"
with life being such a touch and go..
when it'll end you really never know..
ever stopped a while?thought and pondered?
how you REALLy wish to be REMEMBERED?
a LIAR? a CROOK? a ROGUE? a wretched CHEAT?
or a sincere bloke sweating to make ends meet?
an insecure,jealous,unhappy lil grouch?
or a pal who cheered for your success dancin on the couch?
a rich CEO signing away cheques for charity?
a humble man donating our=t of his scarcity?
a person who always jeered,smirked or sniggered?
or a funnybone whose laughter healed and cured?
a son who abandoned his parents without much ado?
or a daughter who did what no son could ever do?
a govt.servant infamous for heavy duty bribes?
or one of those bravehearts who laid down their liveS?
a buddy who ll carry your bags with his own even in the noon heat,
or a "FRIEND" whose cell is "available" only when theres a TREAT!:p
none shall care to remember how you used to look,
or before which god you used to kneel...
all that'll ever remain with them is HOW YOU MADE THEM FEEL!!
acts of kindness, genuine smiles and SHEER goodness never ever go away..
remember: what you'll be known after you go..
IS WHO YOU ARE TODAY!!!
p.s: guys!!! m back!!:))))
p.s.s: a poem wrote lonnggg ago during a production mgmt lecture:p
16 comments:
wowieeeeeeeee! excellent comeback :))
great content without even an ounce of doubt.Wish muku sir could read this one too..hehe:)
Too good buddy..keep writing..
with such blogs i think "following blogs" should become a hobby ya:)
Beautiful. The words are so true. Keep it up! :)
amazzinggggg to the power infinity...but you really posted a poem..since when did u start listening to me?!! :p ...
keep the posts coming..we don't mind being "troubled" by your lovely posts ;)
I must say Back with a Blast !! What a Beautiful post !! Simply beautiful and well framed words !! Last few lines are very true !! I feel somewhere related to everyone's life !! Great Divsi !!Fantastic !!!
back with a bang :))
old diary entries are always memorable and this one is well written.
Big welcome back hug.Well something was so badly missing without you, here.Where do I start from... hmmm...all I can say is Divsi your words and expressions have simplicity and poise. I read your stuff and know for myself what you mean and where you are coming from because I can feel them within me.
Very beautiful. Very thought provoking.
Feels good to see you back in action. :)
Welcome back!
I totally agree with you. Well written. Have fun
Cheers
Randeep
Muahhhh.. Divsi!!
Now that's called being back with a bangggg!!
Such a nice poem it is....n having written it during a lecture is deja vu!!I always wondered how such a poet emerged outta me during those silly lectures..n look it's the same wid u!!
Nway...hope to be reading more from ya..after all you gotta make up for all the missing time!!!
Cheers Divsi...U rock, gal!!
@ sush:
thnkzzz a tonner buddy!
i mean ya comment made me fly! seriusly:p
wish muku sir cud read wat karan had written for him;););)
@ lopa:
thanx gal!!! :]GLAD you liked it!!
@ umesh:
thankoooooooo! hehe! yesh yesh! assi kaddi kaadi sun lene haan!;)
i shall KEEP the troublesome posts comin mere dost!:p
@ bharat:
thankew buddy!:] m humbled by ya comment:) means a lot to me!!:)
@braj:
heylo!! thankyou:)) m happy to be back! n yes diary entries are the best things that cud happen to anyone!:)
@ pallavi:
a BEEEEGG hug to u too swthrt!!:)
trust me i realised how much i missed this space,this "other" world while i was away..
readin pieces from evryones blogs,relating to it,commenting on them..m so glad m back!!!n i wish i never have to go for so long again:]
thankyou so much for yr appreciation gal! u re kind!:]
@ karthik:
thnx man!! glad to be back n read ya short stories:] kip em comin!
@ randeep:
thankoo!!!
cheers!
@ rhythm:
oye hoye!!!:]
thnx kudiye for makin my heart garden garden wid that comment!!:p
bingo! high 5! for writing btwn lecs..trust me thats where i ve written most stuff:p
lolz
posts will be comin..i ll kip my promise:]]
tc
HUGS n kisses:))
lovely lines :)...and welcome back
And, now we are talking. :-) The one and only Divsi is back in action and has entered the blogosphere yet again with a bang! And what more can I ask for than a thought provoking poem, that has a tinge of seriousness, a tinge of sarcasm and a lot of fun and comedy too (which is your trademark). I loved reading this poem. Welcome back and stay here for good, OK? :-)
By the way, I have a new post too. Do read sometime.
Cheers!
-Vittal
@ sapna:
thanx gal!:))
@ vittal:
thanku thanku thanku!! yep m staying for good sir!
and i m hoping you to correct me, improve me and better me post after post!:]
Where had u hidden this poem till now haan?????Grrrrr
As usual no words to express!!!!
Wat I feel is, Buddy U hve gone levels up in expressing ur thoughts!!!!
Proud tat I hve U in my lyf :) :) or else d purpose of my lyf would hve been incomplete!!! :) :)
Muahhh.... :)
Haye re!!! I'm commenting on all the posts super late....mere o ganda laging. :(
This poem just reminded me how much I love your blog. :)
Cheers
really bful divyakshi!!!!!!! :) :) beautiful poem!
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