did i just hear you call out to me?
i wonder unsure..it could be ..it couldnt be...
did i just see you disappear in that crowd?
i KNOW it was you! so i called out your name aloud...
i KNOW it was you! so i called out your name aloud...
i just remembered a memory..a day...
when i heard the song you used to play...
when i heard the song you used to play...
i just remembered your favourite sweetmeat..
when i passed the shop across the street...
did i just hear you laugh out in a roar..
when someone banged musically on the door..
did i just see you quietly stand...
while i inscribed my name on the sands..
and then..i jolt back to reality..silently pondering.....
"do you also remember me?"..i m left wondering.......
23 comments:
missing dear ones.
The song was the perfect mood setter for this one. Great combo, and yeah, totally nostalgic for some reasons.
:)e n s
@ neha: welcome to my blog:) thnx for visitin:)
@ shaun: thankoo..rememba dooba dooba in 11th std,,the all-boys troupe dat sung it? hehe
@ ajit: grrrrrrrrr! shes ubiquitous for u aint she?;p
De ja Vu,
Redolence.... i dnt hve enuf words to describe...
A bit touchy for me....!
Remembrance....sometime its pleasure n also d treasure.
Awesome, liked it very much...especially bcz it came vry close to heart.... :)
[deleted d former comment as it had some stupid typin errors..:) ]
as I said, nostalgic plus LOL! :P
That one was fun...sounded like each one was a heartbroken devdas with a glass of whisky and a guitar at hand hehehe
Oye if this is truth and not fiction...chuck yaar !!
The poem as it is nice but i dont like the things u r saying through it (if in fact its fact and not fiction)...
luv
amith
lost in the thughts of someone!! Mmm.. Memories are always sweet. Only present thoughts taste bad.. Ofcourse none can forget that easily...
Cheers
Randeep
wonderful as always..n u reminded me of d song our class had sung "wo sikandar hi doston kehlata hai.."..lol
@ rimz: thnkoo dearie:)remembrance a treasure coz it arises out of petty things na?;)
n hehehe [for the grammatical errors- i got the comment in my mailbox;) u re vocab will make up for nethin gal!:p hehe
@ shaun: hahahaha!!!yeah they even had their shirts out:p sigggghh!! swamissssss!
@ amith!!!
nahhhhhhhhhhhhhiii!!!! yeh sach nahi hai:):) hehe
arre this wasnt for ne bf/ ex bf/crush [ i wrote let go rememba?]
a piece of PURE fiction..bits n pieces inspired frm reality..[missin a school frn..missin my granny..missing my sis..lol]
i shud ve kept a disclaimer na!?!lol
@ randeep: buddy!lost in thots of not someone..its many ppl [lol..dont get me rong;p]] i request u to read my reply to amith...;) next time i put ne such poem i shall ensure it is accompanied by a disclaimer;)
@ prince: yeaaahh! :) u shaun n sidhesh [wid tabla]hehe!so much fun ya..was pritesh also a part? class ka CR!!
yes u shouldve...:)...ok since aint that kinda poem..LUVDDD IT :p
i luved it......... gud touchy lines!!
:)
Life has moved in a fast pace. .
And the wonder just stays. .
Good one :P .. And you should have put a disclaimer. . :P
yaar, the lines seemed so random. Seemed like u simply added random words to get a rhyme.
But the last 2 lines were touching...
We remember some ppl a lot...but it hurts when we realise that they dont remember us at all
Cheers
CRD
@ shwetha: hehe:) yea this post was a BEEG lesson as far as disclaimers r concerned!;)
@ CRD: rhymes happned re!:p lol :)
@ bro: :):)
brought back some memories for me...sumtymes it so difficult to move on...n worse wen u noe dat ur pain does not affect d one u cry for!!! hats off to u...
Hi Divsi, I have shared this poem of yours in this week's A Sneak From The Past. You can check it out here: https://vinithadileep.wordpress.com/2015/01/28/a-sneak-from-the-past-7/. Happy Blogging. :)
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